rate_review Reviews

A wonderful little taste of erotica. I'm also loving the folk law theame. Good work, i'm going to have to go have a cold shower now!

this story is great. what kind of nymph will he sleep with next?? or does he only love water?

this story was awesome and i was heartbroken to see that you only got two reviews for it. I loved it, really. i really liked how it was short but complete and didn\'t leave me feeling cut off at the end even thouh you could go deeper into the story. I cant wait to read and review more of your work.
Peace.
Tahpi

Wow, hot, hot stuff! Great writing and nice detail! I especially liked the way it ended. My only peeve would be to know a little more about the characters. Reading the end made me curious and I think ths piece could be so much more if you develop what was implied in the end a little more. But that would make for a longer story. Either way great work I really like this!

I not long finished a story of my own containing a nymph, actually, although mine was a forest nymph, and I haven\'t uploaded it yet. But I liked your story. It was well written with good descriptions. Although I can tell you one thing with certainty, having ones testicles crushed during sex would instantly, and forcefully, end any sexual thoughts whatsoever! lol But well done though.