rate_review Reviews

after some needed sleep i reread Smoky. I can just picture it all in my head. I can smell honeysuckles in the air, feel the wind on my face. I really like Joby. he kind of reminds me of Angelo with that "you want me you want me. if you don't then yo know the way out." attitude.

eep! you do good non vamp stories don't give up on this. i think I'm becoming addicted.

Ah! Of course it´s good. You are a good writer so your writing is good.

*grins* Didn´t know you had gravitation fanfics. XDDD I´ll definitivelly read those too. H__H

It was good. Different from what I\'m used to seeing from you, but definately good. The only issue I see is that you make the fact that they\'re Southern too much of an issue. Write them, and show that they\'re Southern by the way that they act, but not by explaining that\'s why they do it, if it\'s an integral part of their personality, then it doesn\'t need to be said.

You know you MUST finish this! And on such an evil cliffhanger too! >:) I absolutely loved it! *shakes pom poms \"Go Spence and Joby!!\"* *clears throat* On a more serious note, it\'s shaping up to be an awesome fic and I was sad when I reached the end and there wasn\'t anymore. I\'m looking forward to the Spence/Kathy conflict and how their relationship will change as Spence \"takes what he wants\" with it concerns Joby. So yes please write more and I\'ll love you forever. :-*

I dont believe I have ever read anything of yours before but I can tell you this, I will now!!! You write excellently! This was a wonderful story and I can\'t wait to read more of it so please update soon. Your characterizations are great and the story line is smooth. Truley one of the better written stories here! Thank you again!