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for Forbidden Love

by Tatoa

person Kuro Kaze
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am SOOOOOOO loving this. Both styles go really well together...hehhehheh(gomen couldnt help it) ano, i cant wait for more so keep it up(...)
person Kita
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cheese! xD *cracks up* You just had to, didn\'t you? >_<;
person Tatoa
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Excellent job koi ^^ Yes people that\'s MY boyfriend *cling* and I\'ll kill any of you who try and make a move on him >.>
person nea
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading the beginnings of your story. I do hope that you give some background on Kira and/or a chapter or two in his perspective. I can\'t wait to see where this story leads and I hope you make it more \'interesting\' for the boys soon. Give us some juicy bits here and there to hold us until you eventually get to the \'big event\', but don\'t rush it. Please update soon!
person Kita
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee. ^^ I love the rain thing. x3 And it certainly does sound like my house... xD Leaky faucets and whatnot. Cept, my house is tiny. >.o;
person Kuro Kaze
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story, and just read both chapters. stupid me just now figured out the section for origonal work,heh, i would appriciate it if u could email me with the word of an update, but only if u have the time for it. PLEASE, ano, write more and i really like your writing style too. if you would be so kind as to add in your authors note titles and sections of other stories of yours i would be greateful to you and your kindness. sumimasen (sorry for any inconvineances) and bad spelling too ^,^
person Tamela
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Can\'t wait for the next update!
person Kita
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*suppresses an urge to bounce around going \"It\'s me, it\'s me, it\'s me!\" <.< *ahem* Yeah. I like it. x3 Fucking hilarious, natually. ^^