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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, so far... I\'ve read all of your stories, and they\'re all really great. I especially love \'Lovely Innocence\'. But this one is good as well, an old, classical idea of forbidden love. Simple, but well written. I can\'t wait for your next updates... I don\'t even care, really, which story it is, I just want to read more of your works.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Iv been following it for a while now....PLEASE keep writing on it. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
Mit Liebe
Matt
Mit Liebe
Matt
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t read an Original fiction story before and this one is great. I\'ve only read the first chapter so far but I\'m sure I\'m gonna love it (I have a weakness for school fics).
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m back!
Wow! I had alot to catch up on! It was very nummy, and all!
I like it cause it\'s going slowly, building up, not rushing into anything.
The charries are neat and I can\'t wait to see how it turns out!
Apollo
Wow! I had alot to catch up on! It was very nummy, and all!
I like it cause it\'s going slowly, building up, not rushing into anything.
The charries are neat and I can\'t wait to see how it turns out!
Apollo
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
again, great job. and i know it\'s gonna be wonderful the next chapter cause of how well the two of you write together. i just wish it would not take up so much time for you to write it though. T,T oh well, cant get everything we want can we? *sad sigh*
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
always good, although a bit lazy at times...*reads lines about steamy gym scenes...* YES!!!! i can NOT wait! *daydreams slightly then tries to snap out of it---only to fail...miserably* ...
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee I lurved it koi. Now it\'s my turn ^^
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee that was good *clap clap* I hope Kira\'s not too beat up for Friday <.<
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee. ^^ Aie, now I have to write about the thing. *sweatdrop* Let the sexual tension... Begin! xD Or intensify, or something. ^^;;
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoot that was great koi ^^ Seems Toya sort of has some competition, not for Kira\'s affections mind you >.>