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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'ll tell you one thing. At least this thing has a plot. Pretty good on the describing part. You\'ll be a good satyr writer, you know that?
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEM - - - Damn great beginning. I hope you haven\'t taken a long sabbatical. Hopefully Joshua will soon find his Melissa? What nasty little treats have you in store for the boy?
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm :D Well well, what can I say? Don\'t read this kind of stuff otherwise but I found it rather... exciting :D Good work on this one, although I would love to read something belonging to another genre from you. Maybe in a fantasy-setting? ;)
Btw -> (V...L...M.. TE) Know what it means? ;)
Btw -> (V...L...M.. TE) Know what it means? ;)
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s very original indeed, and pleases me to no end that our little nerd, is in fact, a nerd. Not enough nerdy, average (or below-average), porn stars out there! Even the not-so-perfect need some love too!
I also loved how you wrote this. It\'s lustful and yet articulate. Good job!
I would suggest writing another chapter though with more action. The first is intriguing and has the reader hooked. Now you just need something more to keep them coming. (Pun intended.) Au revoir.
I also loved how you wrote this. It\'s lustful and yet articulate. Good job!
I would suggest writing another chapter though with more action. The first is intriguing and has the reader hooked. Now you just need something more to keep them coming. (Pun intended.) Au revoir.