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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay first off, the chapters are WAY TOO SHORT and secondly, there are a lot, and i mean A LOT of mistakes that you most definitely need to go over and fix in order for this to even be considered reading material!
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far, I really think you shoudl continue it, but just as a suggestion, add some more juicy details, and take alittle longer time on the situations, so as to give us a really good picture of what is happening. Love the story, please continue!
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch..Poor Faith....update asap..the suspence is killing me!!
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s different. It gives a point of view that a lot of poeple are afraid to look through.
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I don\'t like this because it\'s too short. The plot is promising but this whole thing is way too short. Make it longer so the plot can flow and so the readers can know whats going on. This would have been a good story if it wasn\'t so short!
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Girl!
Good fic so far! keep it up! LOL!
Good fic so far! keep it up! LOL!
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya girl!
This is a good chapter!
Man I wanna kill him for what he is doing to Faith and possibly other girls too.
Please update soon! ^_^
This is a good chapter!
Man I wanna kill him for what he is doing to Faith and possibly other girls too.
Please update soon! ^_^