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for Writer's block (Finished)

by bloodfairy

person rayduke
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah the mocking cusor, forever blinking, telling you you'll never get your work done in its hypnotic beat.

Thanks for reviewing my story by the way. I guess it's just as right to review and critique yours. I read it over just for story. I liked it. Not something I usually enjoy, but I enjoyed that story. Especially with the writer's block theme and how things can easily distract you. As for grammer and spelling. I didn't notice anything with spelling, but read it over again for some grammer. I liked how it was from first person. I can never seem to write like that.

Keep it up, and maybe we'll talk later.

Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck
person Dadella
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heh
this was nice too...
for some odd reason, femmeslash doesn\'t do it as much for me as regular slash, but this was still nice...

I liked the way you described the scene so well, especially the eyes...

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