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for Melt My Cold Heart

by savagepanda

person Aya
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After ages I've finally found this story again, only to find jou never updated it again. I still love this story and would really want to see you continue it. So, Please, please, please update it again. I'd love you forever if you did.
person Betty
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when the hell are you going to update i\'m going creazy here love you bye bye
person Miroku II
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!! Keep up the good work!! I would suggest slipping in a little \'close encounter\' to keep the readers on their toes, if ya know what I mean ;)!! Chap 6 soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! I\'m desperate!!

Your Perverted Reader,
Miroku II
person Aya
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep on writing! I like this one. Please put up chapter 4 soon.
person night
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well written story. Your sentences and structure is great. The story line is moving along well. However i feel like you need to improve with the relationship between Q and the Lord. The sparke between them seems to be missing. Bring this relationship closer and the story will shine!
person fuzzynavel
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have a good start! This is a odd couple, but I hope to read more on what\'s to happen with them!