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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh.. PLEASE PLEASE update this soon... I love it
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mm. Not sure where the last critique is coming from but I love this storyline. There are so many possibilities here - personally I say keep up the work.
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey thanks for the encouragement and practical criticism. This is a first attempt at anything like this so am open to suggestions from all quarters.
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More more more!! This is a great story!
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is really well written,with a visible plot beginning to unfold.Dfinitely superior to a few others i have read recently. i am hoing you are going to keep continuing the series.
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December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Christmas is over so start writing!
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This stuffs good, can we get Fiona in on some of the acrtion. I think your trying to givbe the charcaters to much depth though if you wanna keep it PWP, then dnt let Dakes wife find out, etc.
Cool stuff.
Cool stuff.
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I like the way the encounter has impacted Gil for a long time afterwards, not just a one time \'pop\' and back to normal life. Keep up the good work.
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDAAAATTTTTEEE!!!!!!!!!!
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!! This fic is SO HOT!!!!! I hope you update real soon!!!!!!!