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for Surprise, Surprise

by QuiP

person Girl
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, where\'s the rest of this??? I absolutely adore this story. Great writing except for a few minor spelling errors. Nothing confusing though. I can\'t wait for you to write the next chapter. More More please write more.
person sleb
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome, man. hot as hell.
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oOoOo... more please!
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hot! great job, i cant wait for more!
person Sharky
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is FUCKING AWESOME. You need to add more.
person xellos & filia
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love incest stories and this was just plain hot! More chapters please.
person HOrny
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was hot. im litterally creaming right now. more!