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for Surprise, Surprise

by QuiP

schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy buena historia, muy bien escrita, espero proximos capitulos muy pronto. maria ana
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice
person hot2trot
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man!!That was hott!!Hope you continue!!
person Knobs
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM



Hoooooooooooooot!
person katrina
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story wasn\'t as bad as other stories I\'ve read with simialr ideas. The brother is a good age and isn\'t that much older than the sister, which is great of course!!!!!!!!!!! I\'d be glad if you made a sequal to the first chapter. In fact, I\'d be your very first reader.........................please, write another chapter--or two. Ivan\'s a cool name though. Well, please write more.
person Audrey
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incest so wrong yet so hot. Great story. Although you may wanna start bitching out someone else on this site they attempted to jack your story but they did a piss poor job. ANYWAY KICK ASS TOTALLY FUCKING HOT!
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was AMAZING. I can\'t wait for the next chapter, it has to come soon!!! I haven\'t been so turned on since last week when I read this. Please, don\'t let me wait any longer!
person MariB
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person Queen of Darkness
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg i love this story i hope u do a chapter 2 and soon,,,
person kiki
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohh this is freaking good. so hot, i love it. please more!