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for Lydia's Dad

by murdertramp

person drake220
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no no delia!! BAD idea. really REALLY bad idea! love should NOT come into those sort of equations. oooh, not good...great chapter!
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
From reading chapter 4 I get the feeling that Delia is becoming emotionally attach to Grant and it is not just about sex anymore. I would like to see Delia and Grant evolve more emotionally to just make it complicated. Thanks for writing because I enjoy reading it.
person LucKyo
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, Grant can keep robbing the cradle for as long as humanly possible for all I care. I love this plot and Delia and Grant just really gets my attention. There\'s nothing to complain about with sex scenes like these. Cool job. ^_^
person KIKI
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a hot one. I like older man too, and i hope for more chapters on this. but it´s about time they are getting caught. maybe this could lead to some group actions?
person vampiewoman
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been hooked since day 1...can\'t wait to see what you write next...
person gx-Silver
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot! I\'m all for a older more mature man and this hot young thing. Delia and Grant absolutely rock.
person dreamdancer
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice....... There better be more
person lolita
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsum chapter, update soon.
--gypsy -___-x
person effie
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww. i absolutly love this story! older guys are so fuckin hot! goodness! you totally have to keep delia away from patrick! i love delia and grant together! so great! cant wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the twist of Patrick turning up, he seems like a bit of an ass though. Can\'t wait for more chapters!