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for Lydia's Dad

by murdertramp

person cuca
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good
person Jeanster
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, love the characters, love the writing, love the sex parts, love it all! Please do continue with this hot fic.
person Athena Kyle
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I spent the last hour or so reading the entire thing. Your plot is great, and the sex scenes are tastefully done. I feel sorry for Delia, she\'s falling for Grant, yet she doesn\'t really know how he feels about the whole thing... Great job, Happy New Year! Keep up the great work!
~Athena Kyle
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We may guess the plot of the story but I don\'t know what is going to happen in the next chapter. My question is how does Grant feel about Delia? Please update soon. Thanks.
person vegeta\'s slave
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, good story, keep up the good work.
person ivy
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOOOVE YOUR STORY IM SO HOOKED ON IT AND IT HAS TO BE ONE OF MY FAVORITES .PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING IT AND UPDATE SOON PLEASE
person Celeste
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I only got though the first chapter but omg omg omg !! it was one the best stories i\'ve ever read!! :-)
person effie
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! very nice chapter! update soon! you rock! i kinda feel bad for patrick a tiny bit, but oh well!
person xena
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Pouts: I wanna Grant of my very own!
person Grint
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I have enjoyed a lot the scene in which Delia was tied up, i hope you put more smut like this
Now that Patrick is going away the would have more time for themselves, you could make that they become less careful, and Lydia could catch them geting it on, it would make an interesting conversation
You have mentioned the trio thing, but it would be great if it were between Grant, Delia and Lydia, incest is such a turn on...

Update soon plz