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WHat the fuck?! You stop there of all places?! but... *sob* they were about to have a literal sex ed class... Update!!!!!!!

Thought I\'d drop you a line. Iv never read a anime based story (which out of my ignorence i am assuming this is)nor have i ever read a m/m one. Personally im not into either but i compleatly respect those that do. This fic is good, judging from the fact that you got onto the site yesterday im guessing you are a bergioning writer and id like to say wonderfull job on your first fic. Your descriptions are easy to imagine and your situations are very hot. If i could give one piece of critique, and i dont mean to offend but, as im slowing learning as well, true erotica is all in the details so please add some! you have a wonderfull foundation and details are the icing on the cake. Im delighted you enjoyed my story, and i do have another one i would be honored if you read. It\'s in the harry potter fanfiction genra. As to us being similar, im not surprised. Sadly enough there are so many girls like us who are sad, slightly self destructive (and shall i be so bold as to say sexually repressed?). Im glad that i could meet another one. As im reading over this review im realizing i sound slightly pretentious and i dont mean to sound like that at all. oh well, good luck with your writing.
-Demosthenes