rate_review Reviews

hey i would really like to read this story because it sounds really good.

Well that was just a damn depressing way to end the story. But, I\'m glad you did finish it, even if it wasn\'t an ending I had hoped for. Good job on this fic (well...except for the ending *grin*). It was very well written and kept the reader\'s interest all the way through.

oh, wow.. i was looking around for a new story to read when i stumbled on this tonight. i read it in its entirety all the way through at once. your words are brilliant and imaginative and, i admit, you had me balling at the end! what tragedy! i can\'t remember the last time i cried over a story. this was absolutely incredible. your words have really moved me and i feel so lucky to have discovered your work. i wish i could express myself with anything similar to your eloquence, but i don\'t have the talent- please just know i truly appreciate your story. it was so good it broke my heart. :)

that is so not fair!!!!!!! you have got to update this as quickly as possible. It fucking great. You must excuse my language at the moment, it\'s 0330 and i\'m overly tired and can\'t do anything about it. But your story is just absolutely amazing. I mean it. I really like it. It\'s publishing quality. Have you ever thought about it? Seriously? Anyway, would love to see how this turns out, what will happen to Dax? And Maen? And the exiles? Does Seleste rule in the end and does she come to terms with the exiles and change the rules of the City? Goddess, there is so much to wonder about...please update soon, I\'ll be looking out for new chapters.
Blessed Be,
~Sandra~

Yay!! I thought you\'d abandoned this one for good. Don\'t quit now, you\'re almost at the finish line! :)

OOoooooo! A cliff hanger. This is a terrific story. I find it totally engaging. Can\'t wait for the next part. Keep up the good work!

Excellent story! Is there going to be more? You sound close to finishing, but it\'s been a couple months now, and you\'re on to other (equally riveting) stories... I continue to be impressed with your writing skills: even the down and dirty raw lemons, you somehow manage to describe with remarkably good taste - without sacrificing any of the passion or erotic impact! ;D That takes real skill! Keep up the great work. I really hope you\'re getting some of your work published somewhere - it\'d be a shame for you to be doing all your writing for free!

I\'m really starting to hate the Exiles, how could they do that to Dax and Maen?! I can\'t wait to see what happens next, will they be able to escape or will they be caught? I must know what happens, so please continue. ^_^

They FINALLY do it!! YAY!!!!! I hope Maen won\'t be too stubborn about not going back, he wouldn\'t be able to have Dax if they do. This was another great chapter, although I hated the cliffhanger could have done without that. I look forward to seeing what might happen next. ^_^

I only have praise for this fic. It continues to be a very enjoyable, well-written story. And now you have left us with a cliffhanger. That\'s just evil, LOL. Looking forward to the next chap.