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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW kick ass story please post frequently
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
Very good idea and you write very nicely.
please continue it
Very good idea and you write very nicely.
please continue it
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!
What a twist!!!
Awesome though!! This is really going to turn out great!
Looking forward to the next chapter...
What a twist!!!
Awesome though!! This is really going to turn out great!
Looking forward to the next chapter...
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It has potential. Very realistic. I like the art concepts, especially the painting by Jack. The detached family too. Do continue.
-Shade
-Shade
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this sounds fun...
well done so far, setting up the scene, and everything...
I\'m looking forward to a next installment...
well done so far, setting up the scene, and everything...
I\'m looking forward to a next installment...