rate_review Reviews

So is he schizophrenic then? I like the Eiji persona, but also the Inoue persona. Hope they will learn to coexist and Reven learn to love them both, though maybe not become violent with Eiji.

That was too sad what he went thru. I don\'t blame Reven one bit for wanting to find the man behind it all and destroy him with extreme prejudice.

This is my fave fic of all. It was very well writen, why is it not a book yet?

Hi! I\'m enjoying the story and think it\'s very good. But I\'m confused on a couple of things I hope you might explain either in an A/N or in a future chap. When Inoue is captured originally and turned into Eiji, why? Why were they ambushed? I recall reading something about revenge against assassins or something, but there was no detail or background that I can see as to why. And keeping him alive to break him to turn him into a mindless whore is definitely a revenge. But then, how is it two years later when Reven finds & saves him, that now they are after Reven because they know he has the picture? When did they discover he had the picture? Was there some sort of hidden video feed he was unaware of when getting Eiji out of the cage, and that Konrad (or one of his men) recognized him to put two and two together? Because you have Reven being incredibly successful and wanted as an assassin for two years before all of the sudden he\'s recognized as Chad\'s companion and shunned. Are the two events (the capture & breaking of Inoue and the attempted killing of Reven two years later) related? My apologies if it\'s there and I\'m just not seeing it. Sometimes I can be a little slow on the uptake (*grin*). Like I said, very good story and I can\'t wait to see how they get revenge on the bald guy behind the whole thing.

To: JukeBox, Anon, and Louise!

Thanks you guys for the reviews, and i do have some answers to your questions! First off, thanks so much for reading; clare and I are thrilled! Second... there are a lot of answers coming, and DONT WORRY, these ARE coming very very very soon! we\'ll even have all those holes and jumps smoothed over, so you\'ll finally understand everything that\'s going on and that happened! ^_^
Keep on reading!

-wing

This is friggin\' awesome! So glad to find this fic. More coming soon hopefully!!!!

Oh WOW! I love the way you brought Inoue back but still keeping the Eiji persona. The student becomes the teacher becomes the partner...just fantastic. What a great way to end the day today, to come home to five more chaps! And the flashbacks were perfect, done a little at a time and showing the pain caused to the present personality. It is so easy to visualize the scenes as I read and that, in my humble opinion, is the mark of very good writing. Looking forward to the next update(s).

I have enjoyed reading this story so far. I think it is well written. Though the jump in time twice threw me a little, it appears you\'ll be explaining things in flashbacks which is cool. My heart breaks with the tragedy of ch 10, for such a spirit to have been broken so thoroughly. Hopefully you like happy endings as much as I (*hint*) and will have the man find his way back to himself and to Reven, and maybe get justice on those that broke him to begin with. Good job!

Very enjoyable so far. Intriguing storyline and well written in my opinion.