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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That I belive was the best story I have read. It made me laugh and cry (FOR LIKE FIVE MINUTES!!!) It is wonderful! I\'m going to make all my friend read it!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story! I really liked it and I think you both are very talented. I knew you said not to expect a happy ending but I still cried. I was just wondering if you would ever do a story that had women in it, like this one. Not the same but like it. I think it would be so interesting, even a yuri pairing. And I liked your drawing very much. It made them look so young, and they actually looked hot! Please respond back. Thanks!
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awesome. Just when I thought it couldn\'t get any better, it did! Great characters, unpredictable plot lines, pretty good spelling and grammar, you have quite an achievement here. Thanks for sharing. I\'m so glad I branched out from RPS to original fiction. This is a real thriller. Great job.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story and the sequels&prequels related to it seriously are the best thing on adultfanfic.! i\'m feeling the vibe, i\'m feeling the characters, i\'m feeling the story. it\'s all good! the style snatches me right off my chair and into the world you\'ve written. it\'s kinda difficult sometimes to come back to reality afterwards, seriously! can\'t wait to see more of your ideas.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My God, that was a beautiful story. It had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. You girl\'s did a great job on this and I hoep to see much more of either of your works. In the end, I wanted to cry or scream or both, but then I was filled with a sense of right. Never in real life would it have been any other way. One would have had to die while the other kept on. Fate would not have it if they both were granted happiness, would it have? Well, all in all, lovely story. I love the reality and the beauty of it. Keep it up!
~Winter
~Winter
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am soooooo sad! He died! It wasnt a big mistake? Awwwww I wanted them to live happily ever after! [pouts] I loved this story except the last chapter! Thank you for giving me something wonderful. I hope to read more of your writings in the future! Thanks!
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well it was a great story (except for the very end) and I enjoyed it immensely (except for the very end). Thank you for sharing all of it with us (except, of course, for the very end - *grin*)
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Howw horrible, after all they went thru, he didn;t live? *sniff, sob* I\'m going to keep my fingers crossed that it\'s all a mistake and the last chap will clear it all up and make us happy *sob, sniff*
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the most intense and excellently written stories Ihave read yet online!! Beautiful job!!!! I\'m surprised you have this posted here and not have the story published. Thank you! I am looking forward to reading the next cahpter which I hope is real soon!!
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad to see an update to this fic! I thought for a while there it had been abandoned and was sad for it. But thankfully no. And OMG what an awesome chap. Evil cliffhanger madness.....will they make it (personally a happy ending kinda person myself, so I hope so) or will the poisons get them or will they fall victim to the man to be broken again? Hope the update is soon...waiting on pins and needles!