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for For the Love of Heavan and Hell

by DragonofRain

schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My first impression: "whoa! indentation! *giggle*"
My second impression: "It wouldn’t matter anyway; he was an outcast from hell anyway for being such a horrible demon anyway."
>_>
<_<
Darling, you said anyway 3 times in that sentence XD
"It wouldn’t matter; he was an outcast from hell for being such a horrible demon anyway."
=O

(nice story! ^_^)
*poofs*
person flamefirefox
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow o.0;; that was odd.. odd to have Lucifer want to offer protection.. for both of them.. but yes.. now I\'m VERY curious to see the upcoming chapters XD lol!! bwhahah =D! X3 sux0rs to be Elijah though >>;;...=/ but I don\'t think he had a choice.. o_O;; I think I\'d rather have him be fallen than dead.. XD that would be too sad >
person flamefirefox
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!! awesome! XD!!! lol ... yeah that\'s the only word in my head at the moment.. that\'s probably what I\'ll be saying for the next two chapters... .. so um.... sorry if I seem to give meaningless reviews.. XD but I do like your story ^__^!! curious about the angel.. hm.. anyhow.. onwards... =3!
person flamefirefox
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wo0t.. that brother sure is nice... normally it wouldn\'t happen that way.. hehe.. ooh.. I just love your stories... so sweet .. ^__^ *sighs all happy like* X3.. these are things I enjoy reading...... lots of stuff I read are drawn out in drama though O_o lol.. a lot would be happening in between.. heheh.. ^^ *goes on now* X3 wo0t!!! =3! lub teh stories !
person flamefirefox
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah.. ow.. that third chapter didn\'t end well.. o___o;; ummm.... well.. XD better start working on more chapters ... *sighs* @_@;; nooo!! me want read more..!!.. sorry I\'m such a baby.. making no sense now.. .. agh.. I could just see the purdy do0ds with the purdy hair.. *sighs some more all happy like* *__* hmm.. hmm... wo0t... gotta read more..... !!! O______o;; you\'re getting me addicted to these.... X3!!
person ffxgirl
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude that was soooo cool!!! will you please teach me your secrets? *bows down* i sooo wish i could write like that. but still. it was really good i just love the emotion you put into it. i\'m working on one as we speak so when its up come and check it out. you\'ll be the first one to know!
person DeadInside
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is very well written, Im feelin a little sorry for Elijah, for his little demon sleeping with someone else just to forget about him, but I see your reasoning ^^ Its all Great, and I wanrt more NOW! Get going! *cracks whip* Oh... and check my fics out too ^^ my author name here is same as the name I gave you. ^^