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person Cookie
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh.. do continue, me like very much^__^
person Darknesseschild
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo awsome keep it up. I think it\'s cool with the nuns in the first chap. Well keep it up and I\'ll do my best if it\'s iaght to keep reveiwen\'. Keep it up!
person chibbymink
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cute! please continue!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good ficlet. But it sounds like it is done. I think you should continue and really develope the story. Great start!
person Ashley
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very very good. can\'t wait to see what happens!