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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you really need to continue this and give us another chapter soon
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Niiice. Might check up on this every few days. Keep up the good work ;)
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i really TRULY do enjoy this story! Very hot and sooooooo original! I love it an REALLLLLY hope you add more.SO great. *claps hands* very vverrryy good! youve got a fan here and will always review when you update!
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
there\'s an idea! well what should happen next? well i have an idea but thanks for the idea. :) glad u like it! also, thanks for the 411. heh i should know this from Bio class! Thanks for your kind and helpful reviews. :)
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was reading like crazy and really into the story...then I fell right out of it when you wrote that \'his dick was pressed against her prostate\'. This is not your first story, so I would think that by now you would know that only men have a prostate.
And another thing, suppose that she was a he, than it is not possible for his semen \'struck (her) prostrate like a fireman’s hose\'. The prostate is a gland that is located only about 5 cm deep in the rectum...and boydog\'s penis was 5 inches (25 cm) and fully in her...you do the math.
And another thing, suppose that she was a he, than it is not possible for his semen \'struck (her) prostrate like a fireman’s hose\'. The prostate is a gland that is located only about 5 cm deep in the rectum...and boydog\'s penis was 5 inches (25 cm) and fully in her...you do the math.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aye...this..now THIS..Is a GREAT lemon. Very erotic, and slightley wronge, but great non the less. Very very good. I applaude you. I truly TRULEY hope you make more of this! *bravo*
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! I get it, lol thanks.
Yeah, Discovery channel rocks though I didn\'t know they showed THAT. lol. Interesting thing about snakes...Yowch...*shudders*
Yeah, Discovery channel rocks though I didn\'t know they showed THAT. lol. Interesting thing about snakes...Yowch...*shudders*
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol me again.
You should continue this! Just make it a many chaptered PWP! That\'d be SO cool!
You should continue this! Just make it a many chaptered PWP! That\'d be SO cool!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was kind a cool and I liked it 5/5 for me
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh glad you like it but lemme explain. In male animals (like dogs), the penis has a kind of fleshy knot or ring at the base before the balls. you can\'t really notice it at first but when they begin to go into heat or smell a female in heat, well it grows. while humping the knot grows so they push in and held it there. It keeps the duick from sliding out and to ensure that his bitch gets pregnant. i ehard it\'s painful and they can get stuck until the knot swells down. hell snakes have the same thing but htey have fleshy spikes on them so if the female ulls away, she\'ll end up bleeding to death. it\'s the animal discovery channel a fun channel to watch?! ^.~