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Well DarkMystic i have to say sorry for making it so damn short - and for killing little red riding hood (but hey everyone knows that in the real version she dies!! and in some versions that she escapes by doing a striptease woohoo!) But she had to die in order to complete the picture of total passion and hunger.

I\'ve had a lot of my friends tell me its too short but honestly, i was feeling a little bit of raw creativity (and hormones) and i haven\'t had the time since to edit it since - so apologies.

Glad you like it though, that\'s actually my first full blown sex scene so i\'m greatly encouraged by the good comments and ratings i\'ve been getting. i promise you more earthly (and unearthly) delights in the future and maybe i\'ll even get round to editing this to a proper length.

thanks for your thoughts and i\'d love to hear more feedback!

Michaela

That was kind of sad that he killed her at the end, damn and you could of atleast put more of a plot into it, other then the sex scene. Dont get me wrong though, the sex scene was good, but it could of had more of a story befor the actual sex scene. Dont worry, I rated it a five even though it was short beyond belief.