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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well DarkMystic i have to say sorry for making it so damn short - and for killing little red riding hood (but hey everyone knows that in the real version she dies!! and in some versions that she escapes by doing a striptease woohoo!) But she had to die in order to complete the picture of total passion and hunger.
I\'ve had a lot of my friends tell me its too short but honestly, i was feeling a little bit of raw creativity (and hormones) and i haven\'t had the time since to edit it since - so apologies.
Glad you like it though, that\'s actually my first full blown sex scene so i\'m greatly encouraged by the good comments and ratings i\'ve been getting. i promise you more earthly (and unearthly) delights in the future and maybe i\'ll even get round to editing this to a proper length.
thanks for your thoughts and i\'d love to hear more feedback!
Michaela
I\'ve had a lot of my friends tell me its too short but honestly, i was feeling a little bit of raw creativity (and hormones) and i haven\'t had the time since to edit it since - so apologies.
Glad you like it though, that\'s actually my first full blown sex scene so i\'m greatly encouraged by the good comments and ratings i\'ve been getting. i promise you more earthly (and unearthly) delights in the future and maybe i\'ll even get round to editing this to a proper length.
thanks for your thoughts and i\'d love to hear more feedback!
Michaela
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was kind of sad that he killed her at the end, damn and you could of atleast put more of a plot into it, other then the sex scene. Dont get me wrong though, the sex scene was good, but it could of had more of a story befor the actual sex scene. Dont worry, I rated it a five even though it was short beyond belief.