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by AnDesha

person lilypad
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This would be a lot better and make a lot more sense if there more character information and perhaps some backstory given or maybe if it was a beginning to a larger piece that would flesh out the characters later.
person asswhole
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good. needs more. liked it anyway.
person Thoth
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hullarius! Hahaha!^_^
person AmaraSin
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
8-ball...damn do i miss that place.

Why the hell did loui let desha get that far *sighs* well thanks for the ever watchful Shadow.....then again....maybe not....cause that would have nice...

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