rate_review Reviews

quiero saber como continua y nos dejen con las ganas de leer mas, espero que pronto actualices, ana maria

awe i was hoping there was more of this story..its great though!

Well, I geuss you\'ll just have to get over your fit of \"no insults\" cause an author is never just going to get good remarks. Well, anyway, I liked the story, except that the jumping from \"tally\" to \"I\" was rather confusing in the beginning. So I geuss that the kids in the girls class are racists, huh? Idiots.... well, I hope you do realize that people don\'t get that confused over indian-english mix anymore. It\'s actually quite normal in some states. So keep up the writing, the storyline is really good.

CYa
Dray

Hey, you\'ve got a good start to the story, despite the grammatical and spelling errors. I\'m curious about her step-father, I saw the warning of incest so... I\'m guessing he harasses her. Anyway, can\'t wait for an update. Use your grammar check on your word processor though, it takes away from the story a bit. Update soon! :o)

Great story, i like were it is going. And I like the character. She isn\'t a classic Beauty that we always see.