schedule
November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, we don\'t really need grammer, nope, not one bit. I mean what good is it? We don\'t need to capitalize such things as, oh, I don\'t know, names perhaps, or beginning words of sentences. And spelling, don\'t even get me started on that, who thinks of a stupid thing like spelling? Why don\'t we all just spell words the way we want to? Sounds like a plan to me. Please, for the world, use a thing called a SPELL CHECKER, capitalize words when need be, and format properly. Your story would be so much better if you do.
schedule
November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its an okay story but the spelling was so bad it kinda threw me off might wanna work on that.
schedule
November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Go on please! I want more. Hehe, how fun is this? Right more chapters, lots of them!
schedule
November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was....really bad.
You really need to work on your spelling, grammar, and formatting, anything this story might have had went to waste because you didn\'t proof read. My suggestion is you redo this chapter before posting anymore.
You really need to work on your spelling, grammar, and formatting, anything this story might have had went to waste because you didn\'t proof read. My suggestion is you redo this chapter before posting anymore.