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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah good write more!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Make the scenes longer and with more descriptions. But you have a lot of potential, the story really made me horny. Go on with it!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Make the scenes longer and with more descriptions. But you have a lot of potencial, the story really made me horny. Go on with it!
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more!
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad but you might like to make it longer and try to keep each seen longer.
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sooo hot, need more kinky toys with older man.....
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update this one. Very interesting. And you\'re right. Her toyes are weird.
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!
I like your story a lot and really do want to know what happens next!
I like your story a lot and really do want to know what happens next!
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s a good story, but you need to improve your English. Run a spellcheck and do not use word you\'re not sure what they mean. Good luck !!!
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, the plot is set.
Second, both kids are to young to fuck, so I think an older kid, possibly 13-15, should be introduced to fuck her.
Second, both kids are to young to fuck, so I think an older kid, possibly 13-15, should be introduced to fuck her.