rate_review Reviews

Oh, this a very good start...hope it gets better...

I\'m loving it! Bloody brilliant....I want chapter three as soon as possible! ta

I thought you\'d forgotten all about this... i was sad and was thinking about sending you emails demanding continuations. J/k.
Chapter three was great! Need. more. Soon!!!

come on love.. don't leave us hanging..its been awhileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

AHHHHHHHH! So annoying. Please Please Please write more. I hate nothing more than a story that gets me hooked and leaves it unfinished. By the way, I think itn amn amazing story.

But what does he do now that he's turned on and and and.... I wnat more! * wails * please? * gives you puppy dog eyes * ta

Oh, god, need.more.now. really..liked now...

omg that was a good intro....


hope it gets better

pssst! Thanks for liking my story. Hopefully I'll be able to update it sometime soon but until sometime Wednesday I'm away from home visiting a university. I like this story you've started. Lovely grammar and spelling, much better than what most people have n AFn AFF. ( I'm not really one to talk, the moscentcent chapter of Christ omon?mon? has plenty of typos. ) ANyhow, I can't wait to see what happens between you're two characters. It ought to be interesting. * grins mischievously * I'll keep an eye on your story for updates. Sorry I haven't updated mine that recently. I'll attempt to remedy that. ta

This was a very ncie start. More!