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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this a very good start...hope it gets better...
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving it! Bloody brilliant....I want chapter three as soon as possible! ta
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought you\'d forgotten all about this... i was sad and was thinking about sending you emails demanding continuations. J/k.
Chapter three was great! Need. more. Soon!!!
Chapter three was great! Need. more. Soon!!!
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
come on love.. don't leave us hanging..its been awhileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH! So annoying. Please Please Please write more. I hate nothing more than a story that gets me hooked and leaves it unfinished. By the way, I think itn amn amazing story.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
But what does he do now that he's turned on and and and.... I wnat more! * wails * please? * gives you puppy dog eyes * ta
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god, need.more.now. really..liked now...
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was a good intro....
hope it gets better
hope it gets better
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pssst! Thanks for liking my story. Hopefully I'll be able to update it sometime soon but until sometime Wednesday I'm away from home visiting a university. I like this story you've started. Lovely grammar and spelling, much better than what most people have n AFn AFF. ( I'm not really one to talk, the moscentcent chapter of Christ omon?mon? has plenty of typos. ) ANyhow, I can't wait to see what happens between you're two characters. It ought to be interesting. * grins mischievously * I'll keep an eye on your story for updates. Sorry I haven't updated mine that recently. I'll attempt to remedy that. ta
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a very ncie start. More!