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for Far from Perfect

by Jem

person Kelly
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to see that you are not going to continue this fic because I was really enjoying it. I can't wait til Jason and Charlie get it on. I wasn't sure at first about Jason and his mom because he called her by her first name, but then when he said mom I realized she really was his mom and it wasn't a joke. You know like when men call their wives their old lady and stuff? Anyway, I really liked it and was hoping to read more, if you do decide to write more about it please email me and let me know. You are great, keep writing!
person Tac
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw i love this story and i think your chars are great! i hope you wont dwell on what one idiot said because i really think you should continue with this fic, it\'s awesome. good luck and don\'t let \'em get to ya! ^_~
person Lindsay
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Look, whatever someone said should not be enough of an influence to make you give up something you were doing. At least you had the courage to do this, no effence to the bad reviwer. But what about the people who enjoyed the the story.....(me)?
Please continue, I liked it and thought you did an amazing job.
person O.o
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I hope they get along better. Perfect for each other. Good that Charlie caught Jason off guard, less than 10 minutes in. LOL...

::shoves them towards each other:: Very kyu.
person readaholic
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is too good!!! please update soon please please please please please please
person Jemrie
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you better add more or i will hunt you down **winks**
person lady_inulover
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not leaning the the direction of incest at all, if you ask me. But instead of devoting a chapter to how much you are angry or upset with this person\'s review, why not just delete it and get on with the story? I mean, really, what good is ranting about that one little review going to do? Make you feel better, of course, but then what? Do you expect the person to jump up and say \"So sorry for my opinion, I take it all back. Please, please forgive me.\"? If that\'s the case then what\'s the point in putting stories up if you don\'t want to hear what everyone thinks; the good and bad. Yes, you are a little wounded and insulted, but please, for all the sake of everyone out there, just get on with the story and stop worrying what other people think. And if you feel you have to take out a whole other chapter just to criticize what I just wrote, go ahead if you must.
person Drake
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo!!!!

Don\'t pay attention to that reviewer, this story has nothing incestuous about it... helloo?? The two main characters are gay, for shit\'s sake! So please continue. Please??
person Hannah
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Incest? That thought never even crossed my mind while reading this story. I like the relationship between mother and son and it\'s not leaning towards incest at all. I Love the how the stories going to so far, I hope you\'ll update soon because I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! :) Great job so far!
person Des
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo this story is rank. My dog can write better than this and he is illiterate. The next time you decide to write a story write something better than this sack of bull shit. I mean please...my mom never calls me all those gay ass names like baby hunny and all that shit......that\'s sick. I can\'t believe all this incest...you need help. Your story gets a double BOO and if I had another pair of hands it would get four thumbs down. So dawg, clean up the incest between mother and son...thats sick. Again...that\'s sick.