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for Little Red Riding Hood

by Melrick

person Emery
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, all three of those chapters were amazing, you got lots of talent!
person Rockin_Rebel
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to see what she\'ll show \"Daddy\". Hehehe............. ^_^
person ZealWarrior
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was great! Both chapters were beautifully written, never dull or lacking. And I hope you make more additions to the story such as the already much requested escapades with her father. Great job!
person Nick
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i didn\'t exactly like the grandma angle, but it was a noble effort. i still hope you\'ll continue the story, because (well, if it weren\'t grandma, the second chapter would\'ve rocked.. lol, i just can\'t get past images of an 80 year old leather skinned woman here) your writing rocks, and the first chapter was awesome. keep this one up, and right many others like it, please!
person Anna
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I loved it. I\'m happy that you decided to make a second chapter. I wasn\'t sure at first whether I would like the whole wolf doing Grandma while Red watched, but it turned out really good. I enjoyed it very much. I hope that you continue with more chapters. I would love to read how Red shows her Daddy all the new things that she has learned. *Grins* Please post again with the next chapter soon!!!
person cuttie_blossom
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH COME ON!! NO FAIR!! u have 2 continue!! i want red 2 be with her dad already!!! ok dats all!!
person Sixiyai
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATE WITH AN EXCELLENT CHAPTER NO LESS KEEP IT UP!!!
person blooberry
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
woaah...DAMN that was good! and the whole thing was so hot! the thing with red and her daddy was awesome!... damn now u\'ve gotten me all hot and bothered...WRITE A SEQUEL!
person Sixiyai
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS A REAL LEMON PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL I WOULD LOVE TO SEE WHAT WOLF AND HIS GANG WOULD DO TO HER NEXT!
person Anna
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. That was excellent. You should make a sequel where Red shows her Daddy or she meets back up with the Wolf. Your writing is very good. I loved the description. Please make a sequel. I\'m begging you *Gets on knees to beg* Once agamazamazing story.