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by wickedorin

person Mitts
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts

Whoa...I like it..I love 'taboo' subjects being written. And when they are written as well as that, I love it even more!
Guess I'll have to use my own imagination on what happened afterwards, on whether or not they continued their strange liason...or whether she kicked his ass for taking advantage....
You really ought to write more orignal stuff you know...You're such a good writer, and I love the orignals...
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! You have these dreams often...? *backs away slowly* Heh, just kidding.
person Angel
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love it.