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by jflower

person MonaMina
schedule September 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Awwww so hot and so sweet❤️

person yuh
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is not a story. it is a scene from a story. go back to Englsih lit or creative writing and find out the difference.
person summerraen
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to add to this! Awesome, seems like a great intro to a story :)
person summerraen
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to add to this! Awesome, seems like a great intro to a story :)
person Heath Bar
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww its cute i would love to hear more plz ty hehe ^.^
person fairyflame
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is really good; I enjoyed reading it. You should wirte more of it!
person enoch
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Short, but not to bad. you should keep writing. ^^
person Shadowe
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very interesting... i just might come back and read more if u update....