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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start, please conytinue, I'll check back-promise, really, pre-arranged marriage was common, only I counted three m.s. words, two in the summary and the other in the story. Other than slight violations against grammer, very good start. Very good plot, very intriguing!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start.. I'm looking forward to reading more. update soon
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Start. Arranged marriages are always fun to read.
I look forward to seeing in what direction you take this.
NB: can you include more paragraphs ! as big block of text can be hard to read, thanks.
I look forward to seeing in what direction you take this.
NB: can you include more paragraphs ! as big block of text can be hard to read, thanks.