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for Dea Mea

by kallithrix

person a ninny mouse
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your writing style left me in awe.
You have such a way for words and I love the painting that you based this poem off.
Terrific in all standards, I hope you write more.
person Briar
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. You have the soul of a true poet.
person WhinnieRichards
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Loved your sonet. It's a Italian/Petriarchal type sonnet right? Anyways I love Boticelli's "Venus" as a matter of fact I love almost all renaissance work. They're so beautiful and just jaw dropping gorgeous. I think the title is wonderful "My Goddess" so very true to the context of the sonnet. Your rhyme scheme was wonderful and you show you have a masterful vocabulary. Licentious, I don't even know what the hell that means.

sincerely
~WR