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for Talented

by fijiwater

person MzKitty
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I want more!!!!!! The title of this story shows your skills. You are very talented!
person Ashley
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so you *finally* updated. But GRRRR More chapters soon i hope!
person CB Fitz
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your \"story\" is H-O-T!!! hehe
Your wri is is great, though it could be flawless...
You\'re definitely not a porn ho, though... Someday, you will be a porn queen!
Keep up the hot, sweaty, skanky literature production!
I\'m anxiously awaiting a sequel!
person Jimmy Mo
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t be such a tease!
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great start......the hot details are great but its needs more - keep it up!!!!
person bunny
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE A F*CKING PORNO GENIUS! I mean, giving him head under the desk... while another professor is in the room?! That is brilliant! PEOPLE OF ADULT FICTION, WE MUST BAND TOGETHER AND READ THIS STORY! SO GATHER ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS AND FOES, AND FAMILY AND ACQUAINTANCES, AND SCHOOLMATES AND MEMBERS OF NEIGHBORING VILLAGES (tries to come up with more) AND... AND PRIESTS AND FARMERS AND ANIMALS (starts going cross-eyed) ... SO WHO\'S WITH ME????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cricket cricket, akward cough... bunny doesn\'t seem to notice and runs around the town blindly screaming and runs into a wall and gets knocked out. finally comes to and groggily says \"must... post... more... must... read... f. mu. must... see... doctor\" before passing out.
person Anna
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. That was really good. I am looking forward to reading whatl hal happen next. Please post ASAP!!!
person ezra grey
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Naughty, naughty Mr. Professor you should know better than to diddle your students. I mean first of all, is ais a young girl, second, she is your student, and lastly, an office should be a place of work (*cough*BULLSHIT*cough*)! So here\'s what I want you to do, Fiji. You are goin con continue this story without omitting a single detail so that the people can see EXACTLY what happens when the student/teacher boundary is crossed! So, seriously, writee. ee.
person Ellen
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Like the story please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ashley
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA you you...*sigh* but it\'s SOOO good. *is jealous* i wanna rite good. (haha yes that was on purpose). But no seriously, if this isnt finished by Sunday i will personally fly out and hurt you!