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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems like you\'ve got some raw talent here. It needs a helluva lot \'o polish, but the foundation is really quite good. I noticed you didn\'t have any reviews? That doesn\'t seem right as this story really is interesting. I thought it was straight-out erotic fiction but there\'s a plot. The end is sad and ties right back into the begining. So anyway, I suggest you get a Beta and post your stories (assuming there\'s more) on a better site. No disrespect to AFF, but they don\'t have real high standards. I hope to see more from you.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Great characterization!!!!!!!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lmao- that was funny. \"Your ear as well as your dick...\" It was a good story, and I liked it. I did spot a few minor errors, but it\'s all good because the story is good enough that you don\'t notice. Keep it up- you seem to have a gift for this.
~CS~
~CS~
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have caught what wom women truly want. Some to listen and love.
I also like how you caught the uncertainty of a f tim time gigilo and her first time cheating. Well done.
I also like how you caught the uncertainty of a f tim time gigilo and her first time cheating. Well done.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was just taking a peak in here because I thought that it might be a slash fic, which is not my thing, but I was suprised to see that it was not. This first chapter is quite interesting. Is this all to the fic? I will check back and see. I could see you leaving it at one chapter as it kind of seemed finished, but if this is going to be a long fic I would look forward to the read.
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... this was an excellent story. looking at the title i thought someone was gonna fuck him in the ear! lol... guess not. anyway, i loved it.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow thats so true thanks for saying it out loud
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June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice! i liked it