rate_review Reviews

Hey, this is very good! The story is very interesting and creative. I especially enjoyed the part when Erin first meets Tol\'an. I loved that he warned her about the complications that would arise if they had sex, rather than taking advantage of her. Like you said, it\'s sexy but not smutty--at least not yet. Keep up the good work!

please write more of this story. I am so hooked... Poor Poor girl *snicker* I don\'t know how she will survive. I hope you don\'t mind but I am going to put this story in my recomended slot.