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for When the Other Shoe Drops

by Avrild

person cukid9
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I\'ve only read the third and fourth chapter -I had to go back and re-read to refresh my memory! ^_^- but I loove it so far. Who cares about spelling and grammtical errors when you can write like this? The story has had my attention since I first found it. I will put aside some time in the next few days to read the rest. Yay, yay, yay! You\'ve completely made my week!
person cukid9
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story and the one previous to it...I like them both a lot! I hope you update soon! To tell you the truth, I don\'t much like Josh...don\'t care if he was puking his guts out, or misses her a lot...he\'s a jerk. I hope Cynthia realizes that and leaves him. You have a great voice...hope to see more fo it!

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