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for Number Four-Fifteen

by eighthweasley

person Yawn
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammnnnnnnn! So highly erotic, I\'m literally fanning myself this very minute. Update soon, okay?
person Jenna
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeous, freakin\' fantastic. I love the point of view you are using, it\'s working very well. I love how she\'s so brazen and bold with the men! If you\'re up for suggestions, may I say a few more woman on woman action? :) Keep up the awesome work!
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, I\'ve only read to ch.3 so far, but this is a great story and I look forward to reading more. I would like to say, though, that there is definitely something missing -- maybe a lot of ch.2? Ch. 2 ends with her on her knees acknowledging him as her master, (ie. first meeting) but in ch. 3, she is talking about his LAST punishment (something about dirty laundry and I gather some spanking occurred) Can you look at what is posted and fill in the missing bits if they have gotten lost in cyber space? (which is what I am assuming has happened.) Damn, I know I\'m picky, but I really prefer stories to make sense ;o)
person kasey
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have great stories. are you ever going to add to school rules? that story seemed really promising.:) until next time.
person Dani
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh dang...this is a fucking good story...literally...please inform me when you update!!
person tdk
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Mouth drops to floor* Holy Crap, this shit was unbelievably HOT! Damn, I need to change my panties and take six freaking cold showers! Extremely erotic story and I can\'t thank you enough. Please, please, please, don\'t stop updating this cool ass story.
person Excel
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yipee!!! Glad you\'re back! As for this chapter--no complaints here! Every chapter I\'ve read has been better than the last one. And #415 is such an interesting character. ^_~
person moon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*moans* i def. came a lot on that one, woo!
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you\'ve done this before haven\'t you. It sounds very much like this is all from experience......yum
person gigi
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Heading out to take a cold shower) Yes, you updated and it was spectacular! I bow to the master or mistress when I say you have a fan in me.