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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the style you used here, i've never read anything so descriptive and illustrative that was entirely dialogue... fantastic job! you must write more! (please)
thank you so much!
thank you so much!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should update, you should. *Nods.* <3
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definatly different with just conversations and what not...but really good...please let me know when you update? please?
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
incredibly sexy! love it
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my fave stories. please update soon! i wait, and every day i see there is no new chapter. and i die inside. just a little bit.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya must update please
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep writing this is fun :)
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well the idea is ok but it\'s all diolge not even a play is ALL diologe you need to say what they\'re doing as we have no idea. Detail in this story will make it much better and will sound better too. Even if it\'s just basic actions. You have a good plot here and I would like to know what happens to the poor girl so pleasse continue just add actions say what\'s happening
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story plz update soon looking foreward to it
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so.....when are you going to update?