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for The Swimming Club

by smashanddashman

person good
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good
person matrix51
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love i t and love to see more
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is wow that was hott <3
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE DAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWSOME! I HAVENT READ A GOOD STORY LIKE DAT IN A LONNNNNNNNNNNNNG TIME RITE MORE OR START A NEW 1
person sunburn
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im just a reader but i hope this post helps keep you up... well here you go... thx for updating chapter 6
person Clive
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its very hot, so far I\'ve only read the first chapter.

However, I think the writing is a bit stilted and you could\'ve had more build-up to the sex, instead of the sudden
\"Holy shit, we\'re girls, lets fuck!\" thing.

Other then that, a great fic.
person Tia
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I\'m a lesbian and let me jsut say...\"Let one of them Fuvk me anytime. I\'m wet just thinking about it. Shit.\" Continue.
person yurifanatic
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story made me sooooooo horny. i have an idea for a new member. Her name is Yumi. she is a transfer from Japan. She has long black hair (down to her elbows) huge breasts and a very tasty pussy.
person this fic rocks!!!
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like this fic i wanna see the 5th chappy soon tho ^_^
person Sunburn
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O;;; this fic ROCKS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies from excitment* X_X (plz update soon ^_^ if you dont ill send my evil squirrels of doom to eat out your brains)

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