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for The Swimming Club

by smashanddashman

person J.P.
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. That story makes me so horny. I just have to have more.
person kohakuandkanna
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would really like to see a grupe of the girls fuck Sarah Greenburg while she has her glasses on
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I enjoyed the story there seemed little emotion within the sex. I guess the girls just seemed to screw over and over with no real passion or love. Then again maybe it wasn\'t meant to be like that at all.
person gfman66
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s only because the same yoai authors write a ton of M/M fics. It\'s still apreciated with the F/F thou.
person NAUGHTYRUBY
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU SHOULD CONTINUE, WE R ENJOYING YOUR STORIES,HAVE U TRIED BUFFY FEMME SLASH, THEY TEND TO REVIEW MORE THERE. ALSO YOUR STORIES SHOULD HAVE MORE STORYLINE TO THEM AND THE SEX SCENES ARE GOOD THEY COULD BE IMPROVED, MORE OF A BUILD UP TO THE ACTUAL SEX AND MORE ANTICIPATION
person John
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked the story. it is very nice
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bitch-slaps author* UPDATE!!
person Nikki
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re not writing for no reason. I, for one, really enjoyed this story and I can\'t wait for more. Please don\'t leave me hanging . . .
person l\'etje
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story was good but with no new chapter its...
so please keep writing the people/readers will come :)
post soon
bye bye
person YuYevon57
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just here to help u out