rate_review Reviews

I think you have the beginning incident in what could be a good story ... especially if you continue to develop along the lines of how long it takes people to notice what\'s happening under their noses. I\'m not a fan of the e.e. cummings approach to fiction writing, though ... it works only in the poetic format (preferably for e.e. cummings) ... in other words: Capitalize, punctuate, and use the spell checker, pleeeeease. Keep fleshing this idea out -- you might be on to something really scary! Happy Holidays!

lol, what was that?

I couldn't tell if you're being funny or not. I found it funny, but maybe perhaps you plan to add more? Maybe you're not writing in chronological order? Whatever you're doing, I don't get it. Let us know what's going on, cause otherwise, I think it's just a joke. :\