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October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It is so refreshing to see the beaten saved for once...a well written story...Is it finished? I liked it very much, although I would have liked a bit more detail on the first love making session...the hunt seemed to be especially intriguing...will he get him or won\'t he? Well done! Pete
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July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very enjoyable! You do well by not trying to turn this simple, sweet love story into an interminable saga. Pitfalls avoided!
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May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: That was beautiful.
LD: Now that is just lame. Saying \'Beauty\' was beautiful
Karen: O,o But it was.
LD: Can\'t you be more creative. Say \"outstanding\" \"amazing\" \"touching\". . .
Karen: What are you, a critic?
LD: No, I am just trying to give this story the good review it deserves. five stars!
LD: Now that is just lame. Saying \'Beauty\' was beautiful
Karen: O,o But it was.
LD: Can\'t you be more creative. Say \"outstanding\" \"amazing\" \"touching\". . .
Karen: What are you, a critic?
LD: No, I am just trying to give this story the good review it deserves. five stars!
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is truly one of the best and most touching stories I\'ve ever read. Thank you for writing something like this. It was really a great pleasure to my heart and mind.
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April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the first fic of this type i have read (this type meaning i usually read Anime/Book fics) and i really loved this one it was so lovely, and i cant wait till i read more of your stuff. Thank You Very Much ;)
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April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
......................What more can I say..............LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! It was so sweet of troy to knock that guy on his butt. But I think you should add a tinsey bit more sorta like a epoligue or something. But i really liked this story. So take my reveiw and use it!
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March 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow Troy kicked his ass right there, good story...
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December 14, 1919 at 12:00 AM
That was honestly one of the best stories i\'ve read, very well written, a story worth a sequel.