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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Troy is a real keeper. I\'m happy that Connor\'s happy with his new life with Troy. Abuse is a worldwide thing and I feel disgusted that the neighbors did not do anything. I am so happy that my father was never like that to my brother. Amazing story.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful! ^_^ I loved reading every moment of it. However, I\'m not sure if the story is complete or not. I\'d like to know if it is. ^^
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I love how you wrote this! The plotline flows so smoothly! This isn\'t the end, is it? *cries* It is so beautiful!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaw, it\'s so sweet!
i adore it, and now i\'m off to see what else you\'ve written; you\'re just that good!
thank you!
i adore it, and now i\'m off to see what else you\'ve written; you\'re just that good!
thank you!
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooo cuute! I loved the last part! And yay for troy for punching connor\'s stupide father! plz write more I can\'t wait. keep up the good work ;)
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was honest and deep. I felt a real connection with the characters. You are an excellent writer. Bravo!
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay. So I only just finished your \'second chapter\' and I\'m about to read the next two but I couldn\'t wait. Is uh Troy\'s name an allusion to the wonderful 17th century poet Henry? * winks * Hope you get that. Anyhow, these characters are sy dynamic and well developed, I love them! Again your writing style is so much better than most of the stories here on AFF. Gotta run and finish the story, I can\'t wait any longer....
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was already close to tears from things going on in my life and now you made me cry. Thus if there are any typos in this review it\'s because the keyboard is blurry. Damn you! I finish Section Two and I plan on readsing section three after I finish my English paper. The rough draft is due tomorrow and I need to edit it. * sniffs *
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
* swipes at a tear * Damn you! It\'s bloody brilliant my friend! I love you and hate you at the same time. Now if you could maybe do one about photography? The whole abuse thing need not be included but it would be just lovely. I sincerely thank you for this story.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I\'ve ever read! Is theree? Ne? Not that it wouldn\'t be a perfect ending, but it would be nice to see Harold get his just desserts and have Lily leave his ass high and dry. And does Mark share his father\'s homophobia? Just curious.