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for Oldest Story Ever Told

by Mansonite

person ?
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it, you should continue it
person Silentwriter9
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sounds like an interesting story so far... if a little rushed. there are the same type of typos like in \'Love, Lust and Lycanthropy\'... The Bethany character... wow, a little fast! and she doesn\'t even seem to even like Raleigh =(. Of course, if she is trying to get over that asshole Josh...

thank you for the review on \'A Sweet Sin in the Night\'... and dressed as a cat boy?! how cute! =D

*SW*
person BrownEyedGirl
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ilove this story, not an original start but its difficult to see where ur going sometimes which is good. very good. Why do u take so long between updates? update soon, please!!
Keep it coming ^_^
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh... Raleigh\'s stuck at home with his step-dad? Why do I see him sepnding a lot of time away from the house while his mom is gone?
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good set up... I like it... You even gave the neighbor girl a name! ^_^ (I tend to ignore characters that just exist on the side!) Oh, good luck with your non-AFF story as well. ^_^