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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Keep writing!
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please? please? Good start.
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just something about incest...wild sexy story. Just keep the chapters coming.
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaa! what a cliff hanger!! don't make us waite too long!
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Darnit, just one chapter?! I definitely want to read more.
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but i always have this thing for incest. O.o It's really odd, but anyways, keep going, your writing is great. (Y)
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice giving the character backgrounds andngs ngs like that. It's like a story instead of a porn with no plot. Good job and please update soon.
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nicert! rt! Keep going!
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Must say great beginning to this story..Liked the way we are being introduced to the characters..Looking forward to the chapters which will follow.