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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is off to a good start as far as concept.
You do need to get a beta. That would help with the spelling, grammar, and punctuation. A beta can also help you separate the paragraphs.
It was a nice change to see that someone is writing a story that is not about the almighty fanfiction site religion: \'sex\'.
Keep writing. You\'re off to a good start.
Master Julien
You do need to get a beta. That would help with the spelling, grammar, and punctuation. A beta can also help you separate the paragraphs.
It was a nice change to see that someone is writing a story that is not about the almighty fanfiction site religion: \'sex\'.
Keep writing. You\'re off to a good start.
Master Julien