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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this fic! It was totally hot and also had a real cute creative ending.
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good! Really jumps out and grabs the reader... lots of passion, alot of intense desire. I like the way you sort of threw in a plot at the end. Turned a nice short piece of erotica into a good story.