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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like chapter 5. Joe pissed me off too! Thank you Robbie!
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*rolls her eyes*
The rape scene sucked, you should have dragegd it out, and LUBE, L-U-B-E, ya need lube! It Robbie wanrted to fuck him he would have brought LUBE!
The rape scene sucked, you should have dragegd it out, and LUBE, L-U-B-E, ya need lube! It Robbie wanrted to fuck him he would have brought LUBE!
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job so far think some scenes could be a little more descriptive though..
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more please. This is really nice. Although it kind of leaves you hanging.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool story and good revenge too it rocks,, update soon..
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is well-done! i definitely like it and think you should continue. i also think joe needs to be fucked and brought down a notch. please write more!
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that\'s some hot shit right there. keep up with the story.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Very Nice....:-D Add more chappies.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeease add more chapters
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is nice. what happened to daniel and mark(that\'s the name right?)?