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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the varsity kids better. go further with them first, and then start to introduce the JV kids. Thats just my take.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot. hot. write more.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....I dont quite know how to respond to this fic. er story. Nice detail. Bit of advice? Go for a bit of foreplay before the boys just pounce on eachother k? Other than that, nice story. Im not usually much of a sports fan, but meh Highschool sports can be more interesting right?
AsyenMari
AsyenMari
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update! Do whatever your heart desires! Please!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man, please keep writing! the stories are so hot already and, with the new guys, it\'ll only get better. i eaderly await updates
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! Sorry for my outburst.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um how about you do maybe just a chapter or two. Then see what you get. But you might want to go back to the other guys. You left everyone hanging with the whole rape scene (Which was well diserved towards Joe). Um but lets see what happens to the others.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
they sound aight.. u should make one of the JV and varsity 2gether..lol.. keep updating
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another reveiw cuz I wany more chapters.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh,
that made me come
heh
please please continue
i\'ll be a beta reader
just what ever you decide to do
CONTINUE
that made me come
heh
please please continue
i\'ll be a beta reader
just what ever you decide to do
CONTINUE